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From Skin to Blood, to Flesh then Bones – A Poem
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O, for thy blessed skin, draping thy torso Radiating key images to beholder’s sight ‘n mind Acuities thus forged, save for the blind Launching love at first sight
February 4, 2021 3 min read Free to read
O, for thy blessed skin, draping thy torso
Radiating key images to beholder’s sight ‘n mind
Acuities thus forged, save for the blind
Launching love at first sight
Much like hair, eyes, nose, lips
Whose contours spark admiration, adoration
Forsaking traits of souls laying buried deep
Worthy of love ‘n awe for all eternity
For do the skin ‘n exteriors
Not speak to us or those espying
Forcing choices ‘pon us
Via merely eyeing, not feeling, absorbing nor sensing?
Yet beneath them all lie our vitals
Blood, all infusive, red for all, never royal blue
Raw flesh, in glistening pinks, equals beef
White fat streaking ‘tween stacks of flesh
Deep within lie the bones, white ‘n firm
Body’s scaffold, matching for all
After death, remain for millennia, then some
Betraying neither clan, status, tribe nor race
The foods eaten; the fluids imbibed, lavish for the rich, rationed for the poor
Processed alike, expelling wastes in solid, liquid or gas
Bearing no stamp of intake, race, rank nor clan
Crap, pee and farts, levelers of kings, loonies ‘n serfs
Yet ‘tis the skin ‘n façades
That push us to love or scorn
Redeem or contemn, reject or kill
With blanket measures, feeding massive egos
Bruising fellow humans for traits inborn
They as choiceless as Us, yet ‘tis venom They spew
At Others’ traits no more ‘n skin deep
For the might They wield, the power We don’t
They speak of Us in demeaning tones
Yet ‘tis more ‘bout Them bereft of honor
Judging Us as if They knew
Little do They know, ‘tis Their souls They doom
Yet beneath all anatomy, resides the unseen
Defining humanity, and its core
That amorphous, transcendent, colorless yet real
Soul, spirit, essence, kernel
Where love and pain vie, for the heart’s space
If life’s to have sense, esteem and honor
Must cleanse itself of all rancor
For love ‘n honor to prevail, our crux to occupy
Then gods They invoke
Of Love They claim their gods be
Only Them do gods cherish
The rest can vanish or perish
‘Tis alleged hell awaits, those not of Them
That gods will save Them
Not Others with skins to loathe
Gods peeping no deeper than Their own eyes can
What in truth, is to be made of such gods
And the humans they make?
‘Tis Them that forged their deities
Twisted souls, deifying crafted ghouls
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